All Comments on 'My Garden of Happiness'

by Moondrift

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fairhelena532fairhelena532over 17 years ago
Loved it!

I loved this story. It was well-written, moving... and incredibly hot. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
as you sow, so shall you reap

and they reaped the love for each other and propagated well... a touching story of true love with them finding each other....loved it....

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEover 1 year ago

A nice love story but a page short of fullfilment. There is a tendency in your stories that when the end comes close you tend to rush it.

Rocky_NorthRocky_Northover 1 year ago

Excellent story, LOUSY story tags. If you want others to find this story, and you should, then tags like "years Joe", "Clive began", and "stopped watch" won't help you at all, as they don't mean anything. Hell, "Joe Friday" will probably attract the few individuals looking for Dragnet fan fiction.

If it helps, this story would likely fit the common tags: "impregnation", "older woman", "younger man", and "widow".

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