by msgimply
So good - but only one short paragraph where he was 'invited inside'... shame.
Lukas
I really enjoyed this story and found it very moving and also very erotic. You write beautifully I really did imagine I was by that pool
My dear Ms. Gimply, you write magnificently! I've been waiting for your next masterpiece...thank you.
Marty Eagan
The way you , even in a short short story, paint such a stimulating portrait, humanizing an example of a woman who is determined to overcome the destructiveness of a terrible disease. First rate work! Kal