by mandm_bc
This story lacked some oomph. It began well and built up well but lacked a good punch at the end. Would have been much better story if she'd ended up getting pounded by the two guys or by someone else at least. But a good start to it.
How could the story be that she get banged by the two guys if that's not what happened?
This is a flashing story - not a gang-bang. Taking off points for that is a tad unfair.
Just because a woman flashes a man and enjoys that naughty feeling doesnt mean she wants two strangers to gang bang her!!!
Not a bad little story
Hey,
I liked your story! I love that the story is obviously real, I can relate to the silent desire to receive male attention. I like the way it was written, nice climb to the end. Keep it up! (pun intended) :)