All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Sex Slave Ch. 03'
by subboy4821
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 9 years agoThe present tense is used by experienced authors but only very rarely, and for a purpose. In your case there is no purpose, and you do not handle it very well - occasionally you use the past tense. This grates! Get yourself an editor and you will be very successful.
horny4itnowover 9 years agowow i wouldn't know what do with all this. made me real horny
Anonymousover 9 years agoWhile you may Fantasize about a Strapon, let's face it, no Baseball Bat, Not even a child's toy bat, Not the " first time ", probably Never...
Tootight1about 9 years agoliked the story incorporated a lot in it. in the real world, I doubt this would have happened, at least the way it was presented. even if in a marriage, I doubt it would happen that fast, and there would at least be some kind of dialog between the 2. as a story ok, 5*
Anonymousover 8 years agoOMG, this is my fantasy almost to the T, I would add having to be licking one of their asshole while being ass fucked
Anonymousabout 6 years agoPLEASE
Sounds like a true fantasy come true
Love it!!!
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Anonymousover 4 years agoI am going to have my wife read this and beg her to make me her bitch and abuse my slutty fuck holes.
