by elpy
Elle had so little to say during the love making. This story is too short. More needed to be said especially from Elle. I think they both should have talked more especially Elle. They have been brother and sister for over 30 years (Elle 37 years old) with no real physical contact. We needed more talking and touching and telling each other how they felt. She went from nothing to fucking in a short time.
Also, why no mention about next week and the family visit except in passing.
Great story just need more emotional feelings.