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prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
An Awesome story of love making

Elle had so little to say during the love making. This story is too short. More needed to be said especially from Elle. I think they both should have talked more especially Elle. They have been brother and sister for over 30 years (Elle 37 years old) with no real physical contact. We needed more talking and touching and telling each other how they felt. She went from nothing to fucking in a short time.

Also, why no mention about next week and the family visit except in passing.

Great story just need more emotional feelings.

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Elpy is a writer of visceral, erotic stories with an emphasis on detail. Elpy's mission is to trailblaze new ways of describing sexual interaction, to try and push the boundaries of vocabulary to stimulate the reader's imagination.

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