All Comments on 'My Half Sisters'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Beautifully sumptuous! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Is there a plot in there somewhere?????

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great!

Plenty of room for more but conversation between the participants would round it out nicely!

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
No plot needed...my cock was too hard to think

Excellent writing. I am worn out just from reading.

Bring on BIG SISTER...She needs a little love from her brother.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Unbelievably Hot

Once the sex started that was so frigging hot. I was speechless all throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Ticklish

Give big brother a bit of chest hair for that sexy chest, and have his half-sisters gently trace their hands across his hairy chest or abs -- it will be very ticklish for him, and exciting at the same time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fun fact, when someone or something is down your throat, you can't breathe. The nose and mouth are both connected to your windpipe aka your throat, so they can't breathe through their nose either. So when you "deep throat" someone, you cut off their oxygen to their brain.

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Elpy is a writer of visceral, erotic stories with an emphasis on detail. Elpy's mission is to trailblaze new ways of describing sexual interaction, to try and push the boundaries of vocabulary to stimulate the reader's imagination.

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