All Comments on 'My Heavenly Sister Ch. 02'

to bad she could not be reincarnated that would be nice

really liked your story

Its great to see that you decided to continue this enchanting tale of love. The previous chapter was so beautiful that I wanted to read more of it. Since its posted under a different category, i think many people are unaware that you had continue this. Looking forward to more from Mia and Wes. 5stars

With the way you wrote this story there was no need for unnecessary sex scenes. I loved all of the thought that the brother was experiencing plus the love he had for his sister. Thank you for an outstanding story.

We spend time in a state/place/experience called the Bardo between lives. The Bardo can be heavenly. Sometimes the time is short and sometimes it is centuries. It sounds like these two are soul mates and if the author so chooses could develop this further.

In any event thank you for a beautiful story.

It does need a good copy edit however.