All Comments on 'My Hero'

hey, i dont mean to criticise, however although your story was very good and deliciously hot, im more of a fan reading more story rather than just sex sex sex. I know that its probably a contradiction (being on literotica n all) but i can help what turns me on. he he keep up the brill writing but try to expand your stories and then i will be sure to love them :-) p.s. i hope this isnt demotivating for you as u are a class writer ;-)

This was a pretty decent story, but it doesn't seem to have anything to do with winter holiday themes.

Fair question. 1- Contest entries get many more votes.

2- I read it as a WINTER theme that may inclues HOLIDAY, GIFTS etc. Winter happens all over the planet and I nearly set it in Australia. We have many 'snow birds' from the North USA who pass several months in Florida each year, so I think it is a creative match.

You may want to read my EMANCIPATION series though only 10 of 15 chapters are done. I just reread last year's Halloween story, Spirit of Halloween, and like it more than ever. The 'A' story is the orgy, but the 'B' story rounds it out nicely and contains the loving twist.

Good luck in the contest

Even women can be horny players.