All Comments on 'My Hot Wife Katie Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Another great chapter

Loved it more please !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Oh come on!!!!!

The guy got nothing? What a jip. Would have been 100 if he could have caught a little head and he could have fucked her and came inside her. That would have made this story so much better. I hope this guy gets her and gets her goooood.

AponeAponealmost 15 years ago
Loved It!!

Damn dude that was hot! I'm a big fan of your Katie series and can't wait to see what happens in chapter 12. Great writing and you are doing an excellent job of moving this couple along. I can't wait to see what comes up next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
cant wait for more

More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Loved it

keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

Great sexy story, is there anymore??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Suggestion

That was pretty awesome, however I hope next time theres a grand finally. Just to make things different, why don't you make something go terribly wrong for her? I mean worse than getting blackmailed, like a pop shot in the eye or something? hehe

Dragonfire14Dragonfire14almost 10 years ago
Preposterous!

While the story flows rather well, the underlying premise is preposterous. Early on in this series of epistles, chapters 1 & 2, Katie is an executive at a bank. Now most companies that deal with information about individuals in the general population, train their staffs on the HIPPA and other pertinent laws. So how is it that by this chapter and several others involving the vulgar neighbor that Katie doesn't know the ramifications of the HIPAA laws. I realize this is a fantasy but to make it believable the underlying premise has to be rock solid. These chapters fail that test!!! Further, if Katie was smart enough to be an executive than why isn't she smart enough to just record her conversations and thus be able to prove both blackmail and lewd and lascivious behavior?

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A husband/wife team who love to write about our sex lives, fantasies, or a combination! We aren't trying to be the next Shades of Grey but use writing erotica to expand our own sexual gratification. Email us at katiekcjackson@gmail.com

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