All Comments on 'My Imaginary Friend'

At first you said Tom IS Going to some obscure college in Minnasota. And how he's going to get a job is beyond her. Then she's boarding a plane for Nicaguara? Where hes established himself. Then she has jet lag when Minnasota is CST and Managua is an hour back? You need to do more research. Incest? I guess I missed that part. Could have been a decent story otherwise.

1 star

DragonRider55

First page is a miss fire. Second page hits the mark a little better.

Reason for the 4 star.

Hope next chapter is as good or better then Page 2.