All Comments on 'My Innocence Ch. 01'

The story was very nice and well written in the first person. You need a little help with editing as a few of the words were awkward. But a good story. Like to hear more of it. Really, would like to be the lucky guy as there is nothing better than fucking a married woman.

well.. nothing much to say, i think the title says it all.

perhaps me too being an indian i get fasinated by your great submission, although i have read them and loved all of them.

but this is my collective common feedback for all.

good job and looking much more ahead.

deepak99597@yahoo.co.in

i am not well in writing long sentences, simply put ,awesome! i was imagining the characters while reading story and somewhere in between totaaly lost in story ..good story

The west can take lessons from the east...

liked the way u did it niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nuf said.

Lovely describing of all about the dresses,actions,diologs etc, etc

It is really live story and feels more close whilst reading. From start to the end i really enjoyed as if I was having sex with this beauti

Good detailing. Enjoyed it.

Nisha