All Comments on 'My Journey to Submission Pt. 04'

Was it Karen or Karen's mom there at the end? Some confusion here--you really need to proofread these, otherwise good stories. Four stars.

Then get a decent story line. This was bad.

Was it Karen or Karen's mom? I do like the story line though. Please continue.

Good stuff Dude, thanks.

Sorry but I missed a word in the last paragraph. It was Karen's mom at the end.

So it's now progressed to Karen's mom asking his to spend the night on the heels of being subjected to the original dominant mistress. Now with the acceptance of spending the night he'll be available whenever Karen's mom needs to go pee during his stay. Awe, the submission deepens. 4 of 5 stars

It seems you hit your stride with this chapter. Lady Elena was a nice touch but she left too soon.

Does Karen's mom's drivers license say "Karen's mom Jones," or does the silly bitch have a name? Would be much easier to read, "judith pissed on my forehead," than "Karen's mom smashed my balls with a meat tenderizor.

Yes, can't mom have a name? The story is getting better, however I thought he had become a piss slut/slave. Also, hope Lady Elana is not a one time visitor, think she could have a lot to contribute, otherwise story is getting more interesting and can see lots of possibilities with both these older ladies. Keep up the good work, my interest and other things are rising.

"She invited me in and Karen was still not there. I looked over to the couch and noticed someone else was there. I could see the outline of silver hair. Karen told me to strip"

"Karen then rose off of me and again kissed me deeply"

Why can't you remember that Karen isn't there.

If you'd have given Karen's Mom a name you wouldn't make these mistakes.