All Comments on 'My Journey with Dana Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pretty awesome

I really enjoyed reading these series!

While I was nearing the end of this chapter I was a bit worried this was an unfinished oldie. However, it seems it was only uploaded a few days ago. Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What's the point?

What's the point of this story other than to prove what a slut she is and wannabe cuck he wants to be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Nice series! Love for you to continue it! More of Dana being slutty!

TrollTureTrollTureabout 4 years ago
Ok...

Wasn't this rather pointless? With no resolution whatsoever, it needs a proper ending. We leave him standing staring at Dana being sluttier than ever(?) and we know that he is not exactly pleased. But does he draw any conclusions from what's been going on? Will he accept her behavior or will he not? As it stands it's little more than a description of a slutty woman being extremely ... slutty. He can choose to stay or leave, but DO something!

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