All Comments on 'My King Ch. 03'

Poor Ulric seems much happier with Vivi than with Elise, the "Ice Queen." Give poor Ulric some chest hair -- he needs the balls and maturity to last with Elise if he possibly can! I'm rooting for his greater happiness with Vivian!

Please no more of the king and his nasty wife that bit*h needs to die . It's so much better with the king and Vivian

I've read all three. It's hard to find a good story on Lit. Seems you have to troll through a dozen bad ones before you find a decent piece of erotica. Like Vivian the voluptuous body type is very appealing. The slimmer more athletic Elise has her charms though. Good erotica has characters with thoughts, feelings and desires. Can't wait to see what will happen between Ulric, Vivi and Elise and what's to come with the emissary of the people Ulric conquered.

..... that has me wondering what the wife has planned. I am hoping that the king and Vivian come out together. Very well written.