All Comments on 'My Last Chance'

I was a little put off by the initial description of Raymond, but then it got going! Fun story.

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Lizzy

Loved the humor and the detail. I like that a not-conventionally-attractive man could still be an imaginative and vigorous lover. Nicely written. Also a big fan of the bondage. Keep writing!

It took a lot of interesting twists and turns and your descriptions were funny as hell!

That was really hot =) Good job!!!

I love how you began with Lucinda being totally in charge of him, and then Rolad gradually taking control and wowing her with his enormous trouser snake. Nice transition! Way better storyline than you usually find in porn, but, of course, with all of the lusty things you want in your porn. Again, fantastic job!

This is a surprise. At the beginning I thought this was going to be predictable, even routine, but the skill of your description carried this along with force. Really well done.