by zoo_keeper
I've never commented on a story before and never thought I would as reading these is my guilty pleasure. This is by far the best erotica I've ever read. I could feel the characters urgency and it actually raised my blood pressure. You painted a very vivid picture. Amazing.
I am an avid reader of regular fiction and erotica. You brought both of my favorite worlds together in 1 place. Thank you. Well done
This actually hurt my heart. I can see this happening in a real life situation.