by LilacWine
I LOVED it! I could feel the chemistry between the characters when they first met at the little coffee house and then when they got to the house Julio was watching. I'm glad someone finally figured out how to have sex acts without penetration and making it a good story, promoting safe sex.
Only bummer is that the story ended abruptly. We could have enjoyed the first time they did have penetrating sex (albeit with a condom). Perhaps Julio might have enjoyed a little more anal play? Who knows... Might there be a second chance for this couple?
Lilac, your writing has a beautiful flow to it and has really matured. Compared to your earlier works which were good, this latest peice is great!
Lilac I re-read this for a second time and really loved it more than the first if that is possible! More please!!!