by MissYellowPanties
A new favorite. Thanks, and keep up the good work.
LIKE OTHERS I AM SO WAITING FOR PART TWO, THIS IS A GREAT STORY LINE, ONE COULD LOSE THEIR SELF IN IT, THINKING IT WAS THEM, BEING TURNED INTO A WOMAN...! BETTY jo xoxo PS ONE QUESTION: WHEN IS SHE GOING TO GET HER BREASTS, TO BE A COMPLETE WOMAN...!
Blown away by the creativity with this "Corporation" and the people in it. The only reason it didn't get five stars was the male anal sex at the end-- it seemed like the author had never experienced it himself, so gave us only a bare sketch. The whole story led up to that experience, and it should have been exciting and fully described instead of passively succinct.
How I have loved reading all that you have given to us to weave our way through . I do hope as I have enjoyed this so much that you will please find the tie to carry on with this sensual tale and how Gerry finds his own path .
Excellent!!!! I am very much anticipating the next chapter. If I can only have this life!!!
I love how the story unfolds, plausible characters, the bisexual development. Can see myself in the story. Good writing, too.
@MissYellowPanties you fascinated me very much with your story about Geraldine/Gerry and Caroline/Charlie, I was very drawn to Geraldine/Gerry.
I am in love with Geraldine/Gerry, I would like to be like her.
I am very interested in whether Geraldine/Garry will reunite with Caroline/Charlie, or will they get married and create their own family?
And what will happen to the hostel and Mrs. Graham?
Maybe she will be their good spirit, become their mother?
ps. Sorry for any errors and linguistic inaccuracies, I don't speak English. SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. ππ©π»βπ¦³βοΈβ€οΈπ§π»β§π§π».