All Comments on 'My Life as a Video Pornographer Ch. 03'

This reads like the front end of one story welded onto the back end of another--known in the motor trade as a 'ringer'. Individually, great well-written tales--together, don't work. In the first half, Tim blushes if she looks at him--in the second, he turns out to be an experienced pornographer, pulling in 90k a year--but he works in a car wash??

She is a virgin--but overnight she is ready to get naked all over the internet. Exhibitionism OK, buy this is too much.

I hope this is helpful.

You have captured the confusion of a woman so well, I have to ask or will check your bio, man or woman. Tim understands this so very well in this story, I think he'll do very well here.

Oh Julie was going to learn the business and was thinking very logically on how to continue with Tim and then this happens. I'd like to live next door.