by worldhistorybuff
Nice story line and depth to the main character. I hope you keep the additional chapters coming quickly. There are so many directions and levels the story can take.
This would have been a better place to end chapter one I think. You've got everybody wondering what's going to happen next.
And I'm glad I finally got around to doing it now :-)
I wasn't going to comment until I read them all but I really enjoyed the first two chapters. I like Pippa! She's got a great personality and I like her caffeine addiction because I sure can relate to it LOL!
So can't wait for her to meet up with the 'wall' again hehehe!