All Comments on 'My Little Cousin'

That was really hot..

That was so hot, my cock is aching , just had to read it again and wank.

Except for a few instances of using present and past tenses mixed together (sometimes in the same sentence) this was a hot read.

I also would have liked to have had a bit better physical description of Victoria. About all we know is she has big tits and a bare pussy.

Thanks for that constructive feedback...will look to incorporate a better description into the 3rd chapter

I cant wait for more! So hot!

After the first few paragraphs, you seem to have run out of synonyms as well as imagination. The sex seemed to be mostly a matter of trading highly-repetitive dirty talk and profanity. There's got to be more to it than that! And the bit with the Oriental girl at the end simply proves how superficial (and unloving) the two cousins are.

The hot skin of her arse? Arses are always cold - it's the law.

This is a great story, but having read it, this reviewer would certainly like to have the back ground events of these characters given in more detail. In other words, a prequel would really be a good idea. There have been some complaints about grammar by the author, but 1) it is very difficult to edit one's own work and 2) the writing of this author continues to improve, as a later story Fun at Work (perhaps the author's finest so far) proves.