All Comments on 'My Little Sister: Virgin to BDSM'

by jon.hayworth

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
for your enjoyment.

I really enjoyed this story, well structured and flowed smoothly. Easy to get lost in the story which in my mind is an indication of a well written account. Well Done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Amazing!!!!!!!!

I love this all my favorite this wrapped in to one well written story. I hope we get to see more of theses characters stories and sexy times

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I wanted to love it but there is too much wrong with it realistically

This would need to take place on an alien planet to work. If it was not supposed to be about humans in earth now it would have been great with some tweaks. If your going to write about a woman's body at least google some information. This girl would be hospitalized right now. Men should give out correct information in these stories so that women and you guys have better sex. First, the vagina is elastic we can have 10lb plus babies and it goes back to normal. If not kegel excercises does it. So. I a 33 year old does not have a stretched out pussy unless she is trying to and keeps something In it to stretch. If she active and rides horses a lot unlikely she has a hymen. Even if she did or didn't not a chance in hell he fists her the first night nevermind that quickly. If he heard something pop he broke tendon and ligements and her pain woeful have her in the hospital with a 2 to 8 month recovery. Just like when it happens in child birth. Is all this did happen and she is not dying and enjoying g it she will be dead shortly because no pain will be enough for her. Last come on that is not at all how a cervix works. And a cervixal orgasm is not caused by penetration but stimulation. Proving you never did it or learned how too. She would be dying if he shoved something into her cervix then pried it open. He may have damaged her for ever having a child. I had to stop after that one. It does help to realize why so much bad sex happens out there.

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
I am amazed.

I don't know what to say. As your other commenter said, the physiology doesn't seem correct; however, my cock stayed hard through all of the sex scenes. Thus my 5*rating; though I am not sure how any of the female readers of this will react. I am not a BDSM guy usually, but I have had a girlfriend that liked to be fisted occasionally, and I would comply when she asked me to add fingers and then finally the thumb and the rest of my hand.

va45va45about 6 years ago
Wonderful

A very good start and so much more to do and share. Hope to read more, thanks.

pampackstonepampackstonealmost 6 years ago
Cracked pelvis

Been and done fisting , being the giver of the fisting.

Never heard of hitting the pelvis mond .

Has anyone.

Breaking bones is a little much and not real.

Love some comments on this.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 3 years ago
Anon 3 / 20/ 18

Your spot on . I too gave up reading it too. Over the top and unrealistic.. ⭐️

MstrPussyEaterMstrPussyEaterover 2 years ago

I have done allot but only fisted a couple of women and one instructed me on how she liked it and was a Major Squirter as I got her to do it up to 4 feet one time. And while allot was not accurate it was more of the idea of both Master slave and combine some incest in there that made it hot. I currently have a sensitive lady who can almost cum from nipples being pinched, and is so multi-climactic when I eat her I can do it for hours… Hence my screen name as I have her Howling and thrashing as she cums over and over. And believe me it can be a workout for me too as it isn't easy keeping a woman cumming for 2 or 3 hours and the sheets are a stream afterwards. Recently I have also been blindfolding and tying her up loosely and adding in some spanking which because her ass is so spectacular she goes crazy and I know that I will be fucking her ass that night and if I have properly prepped her she will be cumming from that too, as she has said I am the Only man that has made her cum multiple times and enjoy anal almost as much as regular fucking. I would love to fist her but it takes awhile and as my love has a bad back a limit of about 2 -3 hours is a stopping point before her back makes her racked with pain that takes hours to recover from. But also conveyed it is Also because we Love and Trust each other as That is one of the most as it is better then even a regular partner like my last slave that I had no feelings for but she had no limits

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stupid to waste a virginity by fisting........... Absolutely stupid.

Gym52Gym52over 1 year ago

An extremely interesting tale, I would have enjoyed further chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

what an asshole, especially to his own sister. I can't imagine a WORSE direction to take this story than the one you settled upon. Absolute crap.

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