All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Ch. 03'

Please feel free to comment, readers. I love knowing how you guys feel about both the story and my writing style.

Praise, critique, and suggestions are all welcome.

bestiality...not a mix I'd read before - well done!

Enjoyed this

Normally this would be-for me- too much sex and not enough plot

But the romance has intrigued the sex 😎djb

Watching for the next chapter

I really enjoy your story. Unlike most story's that start off with the main character awakening some great power in the first two chapters and telegraphing where the story will go. This one has kept me guessing on where you'll take it next and eagerly anticipating every new chapter.

beasty sex? did i miss that who was fucking a cat? I would like to see if julias stays hooked up with Beatrice?

Your writing has improved, but I'll admit I miss your previous fetishy stories.

First, like the story, it's intriguing and makes for an interesting plot and makes you want more. Obviously being literotica, sex is expected however what I'm disappointed in is that the first sex scene we get is with Julias and not Jack. We KNOW Julias can get laid, he does all the time and apparently is a ladies man, the first sex scene should've been with your main character. Not only is he struggling in that department but it could've shown how he was adapting to his new life and whatnot, but either way a big disappointment that the first wasn't Jack. I absolutely approve of Julias and Beatrice but not before Jack had a scene, that's all. Ah well, too late now...

Sorry you wanted to see Jack first. I have bigger plans for him. =3

Skipped most of this chapter lol Don't get me wrong, I like Julias, cool dude. But I'm here for the small kid in a big world, with hopes he'll take everything by the reins.

I was hoping one of the guys and croc face would hook up, and it was sooo much sweeter than I imagined! And way HOT of course!😜

The story if okay but up to this point you've ditched your MC... The constant change of POV, while sometimes necessary, is not cutting it for this story...

Okay.. let's be honest

If you read that and didn't like it.. there's something wrong with you.

That was perfect!! They totally have to stay a normal non crazy political plotting couple.

Oh and find Jack and sweet little vixen to please..

I hoping for this and more in the rest of the chapters I have yet to read.

amazing as ever.

That gave me shivers! So sexy!

I mean story is interesting, but it seemed like Jack was going to be MC and I kind of latched onto that idea. Now I'm a bit disappointed.

I often skip the sex scenes since they can get so repetitive, but, DANG, I read every word of that one! Twice!

Another great chapter.

Yep. Don’t like the multiple MC pov’s.