by NovusAnimus
This is a great series!! Hopefully we will not have to wait a month for the next chapter. :P
Well written the plot development attracts me
Speed up the chapter delivery I had to retread ch 5 first to remember where we were up to
She's frighteningly beautiful, incredibly powerful, and dangerously seductive. Yet, softspoken and kind to Jack.
I can imagine a scene where he melts into her warm embrace, a soft smile on her lips as she strokes his hair. With him realizing that she could trap him like this forever, but being rather ok with it.
Once agen great chapter, i love it how you building jack and prince relationship
But holy shit. This story is fucking hawt. Well fucking done.
... It just gets better. The characters are true to themselves while they evolve. Each has such different flavors. Beatrice is my current favorite; she's just hysterically funny.
Then there's Poor Little Jack. He's just a guppy swimming in the shark tank. He'd be safer if he stayed in the shallows but somehow he keeps finding himself in the deep end. It's nice to see a vertically-challenged hero for a change.
I held my breath while reading about that improbable but fitting kiss with the Prince!