All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 02 Ch. 02'

You are the best!!!

Awesome story !

Please keep it up.

Pt1 was great but imperfect in its early chapters.

The first 2 chapters of part 2 are damn near perfect

Great balance of plot over sex

djb

Jack better grow some balls.

This story needs to be published. Seriously, not joking even in the slightest.

Your ratings may be on the higher side but (and this is a very big BUT) your views are dwindling.... The changing of the point of view is not captivating... it's, to some extent, off-putting and confusing. I seriously hope that changes. Good story though, for many have tried but few have managed to pull off the vampire theme.

You had me going in this chapter! I thought the two of them were goners!

Damn!

I like that. Never let yourself be taken to another sit by kidnappers, it’s never for a fun time. So yeah all out battle is still a chance better than none. However they should have bailed with the intelligence S soon as Damien hit the floor with a hole in his head.