by MrIllusion
Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed the two characters and their dialog. 5*
Good story but one thing bothered me.....use of the word "Gods" instead of "God" which is correct grammer.
To the second Anonymous commenter below: Gods is correct if the author is a follower of a polytheistic religion.
No "Gods" is NOT correct even if the author follows a polytheistic religion. After all he isn't writing his biography. Since I have noticed this error in many of his stories, either all his MCs are polytheists or this seems to be a congenital error on the part of the author.