by Bazzza
Sad but very touching and well written. Very readable story. Well done.
A really wonderful story that is not one bit phony.
This writer writes with compassion, and it makes this story one of the best that has ever appeared on this web site.
Keep up the great writing and I look forward to more of your stories.
simply this is the best story that you have written,and some of the overs were very,very good.
Yes, I loved it. It must be the best I've spent time reading in literotica, and that's quite a lot. It is possible, and warm in every aspect. Thanks for writing it
It is not usual to find a story like this in which the sex even though it is graphically described is secondary to the story line. A very well written contribution. The author is to be congratulated.
This is essentially the perfect love story because every type of love is beautifully depicted:: great sex & two romances, caregiving for a dying loved one, laughter & friendship, marriage, motherhood, fatherhood, spiritual bonds, patient & gentle forbearance -- it's all here. We get to know the thoughts and feelings of all the characters, even the two little girls. This is elegant writing and marvelous pacing. Five stars are not enough in praise of this work!! I love it! Kudos & fireworks!
I like the story and the work behind it well enough but had some trouble getting past the fact that after all of those years after her selfish breakup she contacts him hoping he will change his entire way of life to look after her decision to have a child. Selfish woman. anon jerry