All Comments on 'My Lust for a College Stud Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too short for a first chapter

The writing is good, and the premise is interesting. So keep going. But don't post single first chapters only, when they only set groundwork.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Agree with "too short"

So far your story has been ordinary but competently told. Emily is an appealing character so far. I've rated you at a three and await the next chapter.

lonelyQuadlonelyQuadover 8 years ago
so that's it?

I'm in for your story and then... don't stop an erotic tale before something happens. Either get that pen going or leave and never cross my path again ever... hate a teaser.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great!

I think this is great! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great beginnings...

I can see happy days ahead for Emily and Tom. Maybe Tom sports a bit of chest hair on his muscular chest for Emily to touch, and maybe even taste? Imagine her seeing him without a shirt, or with the shirt unbuttoned, and his hairy treasure on display!

tonyd75tonyd75over 8 years ago
great start

I love your writing style and this start :)

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 8 years ago
Decent start

Hope to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love it!

Looking forward to reading more.

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25 year old Bi Female, I wrote a few stories cos I thought it might be fun, I'm not really here for any reason. DONT ask me to send pics, Skype or anything like that, you will be ignored