by kauen
The writing is good, and the premise is interesting. So keep going. But don't post single first chapters only, when they only set groundwork.
So far your story has been ordinary but competently told. Emily is an appealing character so far. I've rated you at a three and await the next chapter.
I'm in for your story and then... don't stop an erotic tale before something happens. Either get that pen going or leave and never cross my path again ever... hate a teaser.
I can see happy days ahead for Emily and Tom. Maybe Tom sports a bit of chest hair on his muscular chest for Emily to touch, and maybe even taste? Imagine her seeing him without a shirt, or with the shirt unbuttoned, and his hairy treasure on display!