by Funlovingflirt1
There’s a lot of stuff that is great here but what I love the most is the pace of this story is just perfect. There’s enough background detail in here to make it believable but my interest was hooked all the way through. Both characters have got a sense of realism that frankly I have to have, and the interplay between the two of them is well choreographed keeping it fun and snappy.
I thought it was a great read and I’ll be sure to check out your other work. Thanks for sharing.
I only just found your work and I absolutely love the way you write.
keep writing those hot nasty
comments would love to see
your body under me
On how hot was that, it was a good job it was short, or I might have orgasmed just reading it. I wish I had a boss like that going to work would be so much more pleasurable 5*
Great story.
I like the way the passion spilled out after a long gestation period,
Danny is ute and Ashley is cuter.