All Comments on 'My Master Coming Home'

abuse is abuse and rape is rape no matter how you write it. no i know this is nonconsent so i have no trouble with the rape being in here but she truly can not stand anal sex this would hurt her very badly and then to stand by and have 2 other men beat and then both rape her it is just sad that this could turn someone on. the story is alright but the content makes me sick

It maybe a vicious, ugly and abusive relationship, but this isn't non-con, or even reluctance. It belongs in BDSM.

There is a difference between non-con/reluctance and rape.

The transition from it being horrible and painful to becoming pleasurable was much too rapid and sloppy. Another point: I realize this is a fantasy but beating someone up with your fists is likely to cause damage e.g. internal bleedings, fractures etc. A little more realism would have been nice and a less abusive Dom. I have a feeling the author does not know how to distinguish between loving a Master who pushes your limits with care and expertise and letting some wannabe abuse you. I hope I am wrong and this was just some poorly written fiction.