All Comments on 'My Master Down the Hall Ch. 05'

You really had not choice with the ending as Rose and Gabe need to go out in the world for the next few years. Andrew is a sad part of the story but people will get hurt and I do not think Rose could fix what she did. So now you have to decide how far to carry the story and how far you can carry it. It can end now as you said, but having a slave like Rose could be very hard to give up forever.

Thanks for sharing

Whether this is your memoirs ( I hope so)

Or not, it was a fantastic read,

I hope you continue the story, I want to know if Rose and Gabe end up together

Or maybe that story hasn't be written yet!

Look forward to reading other literature you write

Warm wishes x

Five stars for a superb realistic story!

Fantastic writing I could totally see this being a true story (kinda hoping it is).

I, too, hope this is based on your real life. It is touching, hot, and well written.

Quit making me cry. :-)

Had more fun reading this than most other books. There were more than a few times that I had butterflies in my stomach. It was an emotional thrill ride for me, thank you for telling your story.

didnt liked the ending at all

Yes, the close wasn't very dramatic, but I thought the ending fit the tone of the whole thing. There's isn't much more one can say without extending their college experiences and visits home for another 25 chapters. Felt bad that Natalie and Andrew were dismissed out-of-hand.

That ending is like finding a hair in your dessert.

If this is a true story, I hope lil and Gabe find a way to be together in the open. I'm sure his dad can accept it since their not actually blood related you never know!