All Comments on 'My Memories Ch. 01'

Thanks!

Grace us with some more! Please try to be more graphic.

Thanks for writing!

The story was very good , But it could have been a bit longer. (I barely had time to get hard and it was over!) Also please proofread for spelling and grammer. Gotta go read ch.2 now.

but a bland story with grammer and spelling mistakes which detract from the read.

This was a good loving wife and.husband scene, not really a story. I have a feeling that I won't care for your next chapter.