All Comments on 'My Mistress Wife'

Welcome, paulb85, and many thanks for this, your debut story. You write very well and I loved this one - will there be more?

My only complaint is in realism,you talk about 25,35,50 strokes of a cane as if it nothing,those numbers are not real,especially with a teflon cane,you would do serious damage,well beyonf play.20 would be a strong session and real. Another .thing is there would be some sort of safe word between them if they were into this

Dont know if there is more,sounds.like it is turning into a cuck tale more than bdsm.

A great beginning. Notwithstanding the previous comment , I hope the two of them lay Into him without mercy, feeding their pure lust, and he squirms in his bounds for a long time. After all it is soundproof, and it is, we'll, fiction.

Good story written wonderfully, although I would have omitted the m/m caning.

Great story. 5 stars.

Disgusting.

liked your story would like to read more like but without another man in the mix maybe another woman

paul need to run what kind of a friend is bill if he rats paul out to his wife all bill wants is to fuck pauls wife as well as have paul suck his cock and take it in the ass as well as have bill whip him. he needs to get out or he will end up being a whipping toy to bill and end up watching bill fuck his wife and she will turn into another whore if he leaves she might get smart and see what she lost and get rid of bill and get paul back for herself

Several issues with the story. 50 lashes would probably land him in the emergency room, or at least impair his walking and sitting for weeks. Risk of infection from open cuts. Without a safe word, his begging "please, no" means hes not consenting to the beating. Is it healthy to fear one's Wife? Shouldn't marriage and home be a safe haven? Not a source of fear and anxiety? Never bring a friend into a position of power over you or your wife. It's toxic. Ditto cuckolding, toxic. Lastly no character in this story is likeable. The wife and friend are sadistic assholes. He is a messed up "slave" who is hard to empathise with.

I relish the anticipation of a beautifulky thorough caning. In this case Paul deserves more, and the humiliation will do him good. But they are all scoundrels and I hope Diana gets her fair ass caned too.

A well written story,but far to over the top,the realism of the writing is too much of a contrast to the total fantasy of the canings.