All Comments on 'My Mom and Sisters are my Nurses Ch. 02'

Love it, every chapter gets better. Please keep going.

Never expected to fall even more in love with this story after chapter 1 but this one took it to a whole new level. I'm usually a bit reserved when it comes to mom/son couple as they aren't my thing yet this time it was simply perfect and there is noting else that cold describe it. From the moment she watched him with his older sister to the moment she watched him with his younger sister it was all about her love, appreciation, admiration and happiness for him and thanks to him. Sex was amazing and the trist in the clothing store is something they will surely never forget but it all served a lot more in bringing them even closer together and opening a new emotional communications channel that will some really handy in the future. And as all that excitement wasn't enough then came the little sister to cash in her promise from previous day, and boy was it an epiphany for them and their mother. I liked how their escapade turned out and how they shared the love they have. Yet after all was said and done it's more than clear that Jake & Casey have something equally loving but emotionally on a different level compared to the younger sister or mother but not excluding those two from the love for their family and happiness they all want to share. I'm really looking forward how will mom deal with both of the girls and just how the whole dynamic will affect the household in general - Jake has more than enough love for each of them and and individual way of showing it. And if my feelings don't deceive me mom might be getting some from her old friend in the future now that she gave up on men outside the family, she shouldn't be lonely when her kids aren't home.

Noting but a giant 5* would do for this chapter and the whole thing until now. Take your time with the next one so the quality won't suffer ;)

hope there is many chapters to come

Wondering how it would continue. Now I wonder what is next. The Mom in Nylons & garters did it for me

I got my little sister pregnant when she was 20. I am 50 and we still fuck twice a week. I think it would be great if all three were knocked up with his nasty seed at the same time

men do not refer to their shirts as blouses or tops. minor but distracting. overall good job.

your stories are good, have you ever tried to make one focused on an aunt and your nephew?

A small critique, bathtubs are tricky enough for 2 without disabilities, as hot as the scene was it was a tad improbable for Jake because of his legs.

That said, fuck what a great story line you've come up with! Yeah, I'm as anxious as everybody else for chapter 3!

Thank you for your writing, now it's time to clean my keyboard. 5 stars on 1, 5 stars on 2.

Otherwise it's a great Story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I have enjoyed both parts. Cant wait to read the next one. Great work.

This is a wonderful hot story, really liked the thoughts and all the hot sex this young man is having, cant wait to hear the next one and what his new adventures bring, maybe with Mom's friend also

I would really like you to let me know if you can when the next part is posted please. Very good story here that has started with the first chapter to the end of this chapter.

really loved this story both chapter 1 and 2 i hope you will write chapter 3 soon

Its amazing and I can't stop reading. Awaiting Chapter 3.

I could not stop reading this was a great story with everything I love in it and I think that this five star score is way to low for a amazing story with everything like this. I can't wait to sea what comes next .I give this story a score of 125 from DC.Stallhand

So good, we absolutely loved it. Only problem was the over stressing of Mon and Son, didn't need reminding with every sentence. Overall just beautiful, hopefully you get more time to work on chapter three.

The absolute best from,

Tanhors and family.

Amazing can’t wait for next chapter

For those curious about chapter three, about 65% has been written and I hope to finish and publish it somewhere in the first two weeks of Februari. A lot of IRL stuff has happened lately so I had less time to work on it.

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Another great chapter. The scene in the park was a good touch, re-enforcing the love shared between mother and son Looking forward to the next one!

Supposed to be fiction, not fantasy. You still need a proof reader (pointed out at the end of Chap. 1 by another poster). Too many misspelled words; loses its continuity. Don't quit your day job. Bathing robe?

From your nom-de-plume and the way you write, I'm guessing you might speak Dutch at home with English as a second language. In which case, some of the comments might seem a little harsh. Hell, a lot of people who post on here hardly know one language, and here you are - a polyglot.

However, there is an easy and free solution. Simply look up the editors link at the front of this site, find a volunteer you like the look of, and ask them to edit for you.

A tip - if you want to show that your character is thinking or dreaming and not vocalising, but don't want to simply write it clear, you could italicise it. I had to skip the whole first section of this chapter because I needed to know who he was talking to.

So, dirty guy, a good story, but it needs translation and editing care.

Another great read.

Loved it, very five stars!! I did seem to see some weird or strange things though. First, him and mom in the tub. That tub must have been over teen feet long!! Lol. Moms laid back, next thing you know he has slid down and is eating her pussy! Hehe, that and the whole him flipping them both over so he's on top, I'm trying to picture him managing his legs in all this, hehe, yeah, it's writing fantasy magic and we're not supposed to be thinking about that while sex is going on! Hehe.

Then on the sofa. How the heck is his cum spraying all over the dang livingroom when her pussy is riding hard on his cock, pushing it flat against his stomach? At most he would shoot himself in the chin! :). Then there's the whole body legs logistic there which is kinda confusing. It reads like she comes in and he is laying down on the sofa, then at the end she is pulling her legs back up on the sofa, which makes no sense however I try and picture it. Oh well, it was fucking hot still!! I thought for sure one of them was going to slide him into her! Damn! On to the next sweet chapter!!

Thank you for using the word handicap. Instead of disable. I know it may seem. Like it's no big deal. But, I'm able to do a lot of things. I have a handicap that keeps me from doing some things.

Your description of how the boy was treated and loved by his family, before and after his accident is unique. My comment refers to not this story, but to those that follow.

His actions to save his sister would not be unique but would reflect well on many "brothers" in such a situation. But the responses of mother/sisters, though not what one would necessarily expect, reflect well on a family where the son/brother was so thoroughly affected. The love and affection displayed in your story causes the reader to wish could occur in reality. There is so much love and affection between the family members, it literally flows from the "pages" into the mind of the readers.

I agree that you require a proofreader, but unlike many who provide stories on this site, my comments are due to the fact that I do not, as another has commented, believe English is your native language. But another, semi-negative comment is that near the end of some of the portion of the stories, you appear to speedup, attempting to finish the story, thus more errors occur. A thorough proofreader will catch most of your errors.

Your stories are excellent, well written and definitely well though out. Only the errors effect them, but I will still rate them a 5. Please continue to write.

As an example of being in hurry to finish, I almost provided one myself. In the above paragraph, in the phrase "but I will still rate them a 5", I had omitted the "I". A quick proofread, brought it to my attention and I corrected my error.

Although I have attempted to proofread as I type, stopping at times to go through what I have typed and correct what I find erroneous, at times I still fail. Today, I can than Uncle Arthr", arthritis, I just realized I had failed to take my medication.

Love it !!!! On to chapter 3

Scene with Mom in the changing room was very hot.

Didn't expect to go that far there.

I loved it. I wonder about some of the situations and the locales involved. I couldn't quite make them work, especially with his legs being paralyzed. But hey, what do I know, I'm just the pervert reading this, not an author.

A real stoker story. The youngest sister is a vixen. Athletic ladies are hyper sexed. Had a relationship with a college volleyball female. Wore me out after her games. Nothing she would do. Great chapter, now on to the next...

Again I enjoyed the story and how tender and loving they are....good job.

Fun

A very hot f interesting story, but you are in desperate need of a proof reader.

One who is also A grammarian.

“Me and her” is right up there with “run spot, run!”

Should’ve learned that in elementary school.

Still a 4 star rating for the story.

Bill S.

Very hot 🔥

Oh boy! Another 5 star 🌟 fantasy.

I’ve given more 5 star ratings this week than in the previous month.

But it was a fun job!😄

Bill S.

Only real issue I have with this is I'm not sure he knows the meaning of truly being in love first he said he is in love with his older sister then his mom then his younger sister can't be in love with all 3 it doesn't work that way not even in a fantasy

Great second chapter.

good fun ...but deeply disappointed mom also bald...could be expected of the sisters, but-all three? pity

also, their juices soaking the furniture? some of those stains really hard to get out...at least put a thick towel down...

Ok I know its fiction but stretching the bounds of credibility is a bit much. Is this a translated story as there are words missing and odd ones interjected. Men wear shirts not blouses btw.

Agree with previous comment, need some natural looking pussy not an ad for Schick or Venus

Trying to work things out here.

The father is out due to infidelity.

Jake, the hero of the story, portrayed to be the "perfect" guy/gentleman, has an initial incestuous encounter with his sister in the shower, later professing his undying love after she came to his bedroom.

Ok, it's literotica.

He then allows himself to be seduced by his mother, who knowing about Jake's relationship with Casey, has no qualms seducing her son, thus helping both of them to cheat on Casey.

In between, Jake had no problem with his younger sister initiating a make out session in the garage after his shower encounter with Casey.

He then initiates a sexual liaison with his younger sister Debby, after having a few rounds of bumping uglies with his mom earlier that day.

Sounds to me like Jake's only concern is playing as many holes as possible on this course. A real chip off the old block. Doing it even better than his father ever did.

If you are going to make someone out to be "a good guy" you can't have him doing it three times as bad as "the bad guy."

Too much inconsistency and contradiction for me.

And let's not get into the descriptions of the sex scenes.

1 star from me.

O. K. I get it. It’s pure fiction so as to get in as much sex as possible so the boundaries of believable are truly stretched.5 stars for the hot sex.

Bill S.

You are every bit a wordsmith. You have crafted a story that you can actually feel.

I'm liking it quite a bit so far.

Total piece of crap. Author trying desperately to cram in way too many sub plots into the story, reducing it to a ridiculous hodge podge of boring and dull paragraphs that you could simply skip through. And then there's sex - scene after scene of tasteless, cheap sex acts that render this story more of a crap, run of the mill type adult fiction rather than incest erotica. One star and only because any lower is not possible.

Verbose. A 3 page story crammed into 5 pages . . . .

Interesting.......... comments from those who haven't, as yet, posted a story, poem or other offering, but feel free to critique those who have. Because you do not agree with a story plot, sub plot or other premise, doesn't mean you get to rubbish those who make an effort to have work published. I understand and appreciate constructive criticsm, advice or help, with the best of them. And if asked, assist if that is what is required. However, if I don't partticularly like some genre of story, I don't bother to read it.

Perhaps others should avoid stories such as this series as well.

Personally, I am quite enjoying it so far.

4* for the story + 1* for the effort and work that's gone into it.