All Comments on 'My Mom's a Submissive Slut Pt. 03'

This is one of the best stories i have ever read, if only life was similar to this in any way. I would line up and pay!!! A great read!!!

I love this story, and the direction you’ve taken it. Can’t wait until grandpa comes to visit. I would also love to see a tender moment between James and his two fuck sluts.

It would be very sad if this is the only story Tnicoll submits. This is a brilliant first attempt. Five stars all the way.

Great story, very horny

I gave this a 3 because the writing style and structure was every bit as good as the 2 previous chapters. It wasn't higher than a 3 because the sudden "switch", turning the Dominants into subs was a major turn-off for me. I realize that some may have liked that and that's fine. They can rate it higher. When I can't get much more than halfway through the chapter, I don't rate it very highly. It is, after all, my rating. LOL!

The character development fell apart, in my opinion, because of that transition from Dom to sub, or the revelation that both men were actually S/switches. As a Dom, it's a role that I recognize, acknowledge and even understand, but cannot relate to. It's just not ME.

Perhaps a little warning in advance so we'll know that transition is coming. (He says as he hastens to the first page to check to see if it was there and was skipped over!) :-)

Good job, still, for the entire series!

X-Man