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Rebecca shook her head harder, trying to throw off the creeping normalization of what had happened. Would regular sex be enough for her now? Got to get home.
They took turns beating sissy-daddy's ass. That guy would go for any kind of "stimulation." Who knows how long has it been since his mother unlocked his cock? Wouldn't she like to be there to see how he comes? How does she make him do it?
Rebecca put her hand between her legs and felt the warmth of the rodgering James had given her before she departed. He's the man of the house there now, for sure. And what a man. His mom is lucky, getting massive action with that thing, whenever he wants.
Being the domme had been interesting. But there was more than one time when Rebecca had wanted to ask to be spanked. She envied what James' mom had, perhaps. Being a spanky fuckslut was her favorite, Rebecca realized. Her hand was inside her shorts now, circling her clitoris.
The VW Jetta pulled to the side of the road. A few minutes later, it turned the opposite direction.
- COMMENTS
xavierwover 1 year agoI gave this a 3 because the writing style and structure was every bit as good as the 2 previous chapters. It wasn't higher than a 3 because the sudden "switch", turning the Dominants into subs was a major turn-off for me. I realize that some may have liked that and that's fine. They can rate it higher. When I can't get much more than halfway through the chapter, I don't rate it very highly. It is, after all, my rating. LOL!
The character development fell apart, in my opinion, because of that transition from Dom to sub, or the revelation that both men were actually S/switches. As a Dom, it's a role that I recognize, acknowledge and even understand, but cannot relate to. It's just not ME.
Perhaps a little warning in advance so we'll know that transition is coming. (He says as he hastens to the first page to check to see if it was there and was skipped over!) :-)
Good job, still, for the entire series!
X-Man
Skubabillover 4 years agoIt would be very sad if this is the only story Tnicoll submits. This is a brilliant first attempt. Five stars all the way.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI love this story, and the direction you’ve taken it. Can’t wait until grandpa comes to visit. I would also love to see a tender moment between James and his two fuck sluts.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThis is one of the best stories i have ever read, if only life was similar to this in any way. I would line up and pay!!! A great read!!!
