All Comments on 'My Mormon Neighbor Ch. 02'

by Bertron

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DrallDrallover 15 years ago
Marvelous!

Well done,please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Interesting - keep it going!

This plot has potential.

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
God-Makers

I'm trying to figure it out.....if you knock Holly up, will the baby turn you into a God, or will it be her husband since he is married to her.

In any event, please give us more of this very erotic adultery story? Please?

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
He needs to train Holly to be his fuck-slut

Work with Holly and train her to be a good little fuck-slut before starting with another woman. After Holly is well broken, then take on another protegee. Thanks for the story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'm really enjoying it so far

If you have the time and energy to continue writing, resist the urge speed up the pace of the story.

don87654don87654almost 15 years ago
More time

You need more time with her so your babies can turn into Gods for her eternity with her Heavenly Father.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
CONTINUITY!

Where did the large tits come from? Chapter one described them as small.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Really?? (pt. 2)

"I can quit thinking about you," - so why doesn't she!?

Try again!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Most

Most Mormon women aren't the whores LW makes them out to be. If course, in LW every wife is a whore, and every man a cuck.

TheArtfulCodgerTheArtfulCodgerover 2 years ago

story is good but the grammar is off putting

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