by Bowserdirs
That was a bit shit.
Try pacing, and not making everything sound so mechanical. I mean, "This time her orgasm lasted eight minutes during which I got dressed.". Seriously?
Women's breasts don't squirt milk when they're horny, you know. This was terribly edited also.
She could only have been producing milk if she were either a) pregnant and about to give birth, or b) a nursing mother.
And even then she'd be very unlikely to be SQUIRTING milk!!
This reads like a horny schoolboy wrote it. Huge cock, triple g tits that squirt milk, two strangers meeting in a bar that suddenly becomes empty? Um no.