All Comments on 'My Most Amazing Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well...

That was a bit shit.

Try pacing, and not making everything sound so mechanical. I mean, "This time her orgasm lasted eight minutes during which I got dressed.". Seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Huge tits, huge cock

How pathetic. Don't write any more. You can't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
have you ever had sex?

Women's breasts don't squirt milk when they're horny, you know. This was terribly edited also.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
"squirted milk"?

She could only have been producing milk if she were either a) pregnant and about to give birth, or b) a nursing mother.

And even then she'd be very unlikely to be SQUIRTING milk!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Learn basic anatomy

This reads like a horny schoolboy wrote it. Huge cock, triple g tits that squirt milk, two strangers meeting in a bar that suddenly becomes empty? Um no.

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