All Comments on 'My Mother'

This is a hot story no question. For improvement I would like to mention that your telling of the story goes rather fast, there is not much about moods and moments rather a report of brief actions. That can be successful too but it's more like eating a dozen hamburgers than a full menue with a tasty turkey and other tasties you'd like to chew forever. It's a kind of brazen to end that text after just a fiew paragraphs where other authors publish full and complete stories.

Although a nice slow buildup can be erotic, it's also fun to jump right in with both feet once in a while. Fun and hot, thanks for another great zipper buster! GrandfatherCoyote

This is a good start. Mom and Jane should train son properly and teach him to take the dildo and service them.

Very good...will look forward to the next ch.

With two MILFs to handle he will be really busy.He needs to show the ladies just what a horny young stud is capable of doing

GREAT STORY. EXCELLENT WRITING MY MOTHER. VERY EROTIC

AND SEXUAL. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.

Would have been better had it been proof read and edited.

You can always count on this author for a good story--and she promises more to come. Great!!

Great start to this series. Cannot wait to read the next one.

Great set of stories. Reading all your work day by day, keep em coming

After reading that story I am wishing I was the son. :)

My title says it all. I think I'm going to enjoy reading your little tales of erotica, Jena. Too bad I can't congratulate you in person. I'm of your generation, and more importantly, disposition/inclination.

My mother was a total alcoholic. Lived for her beer. Drunk most days by 11:00 AM. Had to piss frequently because the beer soared through her. Had a chamber pot to piss in and it sat on the steps to the second floor. Sometimes I had to walk her from her easy chair to the potty, a distance of about 15 feet. Sometimes she was dribbling before she got there. Other times, she sat on the potty and was pissing before she got settled. She had a very hairy belly and cunt with gobs of black hair. Hardly ever wiped and often didn't wear panties either.

I probably could have fucked her had I wanted to. She had a couple of guys that were fucking her besides my father.

Died at age 38.

Tour story was great. Love female friends who play with each other.

This particular story is Ok, but without prejudice to this particular author, I find in general that US authors are lacking in spelling, lacking in grammar & basically preventing so-so, average, stories becoming great stories...... Has anyone heard of "spellcheck", proof reading, editing.....? Obviously not !!!!! /?? So much for college education..... bj.broadley@gmail.co.uk , Grimsby, England