by JasonXXXHunter
I'm glad that he went down on his mom and gave her head too. He should treat her like a queen and fuck her until her knees are weak.
Hell if he can fuck six or seven times a day she wouldn't get much else done, but she won't be horny any more.
I liked the storyline too. it's hot to read.
Childish, utterly ridiculous plot and dialogue. But I guess if you've never actually had sex in your life, it would pass.
The story idea is nice, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Find an editor in the forums and see if they'll help you clean this up, you could get a higher rating just for the effort.
My friends all wanted to fuck my mom. I would get horny listening to her moaning during sex. I would spy on her while she was tanning, I loved to look at her tits. At times, I felt like she wanted me to see them. I would get hard when she wore a bikini, or just her bra and panties. I know she noticed my erections, but she never said a word about them.
Good story. It is obvious that the son is uneducated by his use of gutter slang as opposed to the English language. I like character development and a logical plot. As a romantic, I like intimacy, romance, and sensual sexuality. Resolving reasonable doubt in favor the author and the fact this is one of two stories, I gave it 4 stars.