by Toucamingo
Personally i loved the story but im a 51 yr old man and if i brought someone that i truly loved and brought her home to meet my mom and that happened that happened in your story i would be ticked off and walk out because im catholic up bringing
This story was excellent. Very erotic, unusual story-line, good build up of sex scenes and not the usual 'fuckfest' in sentence one.
Obviously, the sequel should involve the son making the 'pregnant' dream come true with a seduction scene involving his mom!
Most stories do not build up the situation as well as yours does, giving it a certain realism. It also has an unusual twist (future daughter-in-law wanting the mother-in-law with the future husband's consent) that I have never seen in the other incest stories. I read your first part eagerly, hoping that you would continue but had to wait until now. I'm glad you decided to continue it.
I think the eroticism would continue to build if you include more wedding preparations (i.e. ring purchases, bridesmaids, flower girls getting involved) with their romantic interludes with one another).
I've read bo6th entries and hope there will soon be more. You have built up an interesting idea with this tale, and I hope that in future additions it flourishes.