All Comments on 'My Mother My Self Ch. 01'

Very well written on an entirely new vision. Keep on writing in the same slow heating effect.

Great begining of a good story

Great conflict and anguish. I feel she has a past. Would love to see it developed beautifully.

Its rare to see good english come from an Indian author. Hope you do something great with the story.

but too short. ch 2 hopefully will be longer.

Not quite sure where this story is heading but thats the fun of reading...you never know...I will say I don't think of you as a slut but I will say that you've done a very good job of writing the story the way you have done...