All Comments on 'My Mystery Mate Ch. 13-14'

Love the action! And no clue as to how it was going to end! Though it would have pissed me off, I could have seen Joe get killed and Lynn kidnapped again and Black Ker go off the deep end. Glad it went the way it did though. Thank you!

DJ

This may be my favorite story of yours! and thank you for not killing Lynn's dad- That would have been awful.

1. Shifting shreds clothing a were is wearing, but doesn't affect delicate implanted electronic devices.

2. The voice-pattern match in the previous chapter. Voice-pattern recognition is extremely resource-intensive and takes a lot of time for each check, even with supercomputers. It seems odd that the NSA would spend computer time checking for a match against people who are known to be dead.

Nevermind, having a great time reading your story, it's very intense, you have real talent.

Why isn't this published and making you money? Movie rights? Don't get me wrong, I'm thankful, but this is really good.

Oh hell yeah!

holy crap death comes to town.

Gets better all the time.