All Comments on 'My Naga King Ch. 03'

This is a great story and I feel like it has potential to go several ways. My thing is the one page chapters leave a lot lacking. When you get into the storyline of the new chapter its over rather suddenly........... That is all still like the story though.

They are so sweet it makes me want to cry. =))) But daym I'm starting to love this. 0___0 I can't seriously wait for the next chapter. 0___0 I kept on checking the website everyday just to see if you updated already. 0___0 This is so friggin nice. 0___0 Goodluck with writing and brainstorming for this. :D

love the story but the chapters are a little short.

This is really good so far.Different and new. I hope her sister is a mate to someone important as well! Keep going with a lot longer chapters like 3!! Please

my biggest question is how mom knows him? actually i dont care i just am enjoying this so far,but would like longer chapters like everyone else

Everyone seems to agree that the story is good, but the chapters seem a bit short. I personally like it, it has its erotic moments and its story progression, but it seems a bit choppy because of the short chapters. If making longer chapters degrades the story, don't do that, but it looks like people would enjoy longer installments. Keep up the good work.

I agree that we all love this story but if short chapters means quicker posting than I don't mind the chapters being short as long as there a many of them and posted often.

I have enjoyed the story so far ^^ and am looking forward to the next chapter

I actually stumbled into this story, but I just love reading it! Please publish the next chapter! Ann133

Short chapters are like snacks, addictive & you just want more

Before browsing your biography I could already tell that you are young. You see, author's stories are reflections of who they are and in this case, your story has a good plot but the way you tell it is a bit juvenile. I know you want it to be "adult" but it still gives off the ambiance of a child trying to be adult.

You can write but I think you should try other genre and retry erotica in a few years.