All Comments on 'My Neighbor's Dress!'

Good story, every man's fantasy of a hot neighbor fucking him to near death. The only no no was fucking her ass first, then her pussy. Instant bacterial infection for the hot little 19 year old seductress. Any sexpert will tell you to thoroughly clean your cock after fucking her ass before you slip into her pussy. Gotta keep the story realistic....even if you blew 4 loads in the span of an hour.

The story line itself is okay, but the writing is poor. Get a proofreader, if nothing else.

Sorry; keep trying.

-- KK in Texas

I thought the concept was okay, but the shifting between past/present was jarring, and the grammar in general was in need of some help. Then there was: "It was nice meeting you finely" - shouldn't that be, 'finally'?<p>To the antigrammarians, I say pfft. The story could have been improved by an editor, and that's the spirit in which I offer the comments.<p>If a story is worth writing, it's worth writing well.

That's soo hott! More!

Great quick fantasy.

Every guy knows a Mel, but only a few have

Lived this.