by touchmate
but well written - and I feel obliged to mark it higher to make up for the 1* that Dworncock will give you for the ages of the ladies.
This is good writing. I'd love to get my cock into such sexy Indian women.
A well written and nice story. I love the build up and both women are fabulous. Seduction is done sweetly. Very realistic too! Keep writing. Want the next chapter soon. Love your stories!
i loved the story. the build up is really very tantalizing and exciting. i became horny just as well. do keep writing. i would love to read that sekhar would make one of his trainees pregnant. ooooh!!!! that would be soooo sexy.
That lovely and hot narrative. Very good buddy, keep writing more...
Very happy to know that you did the same thing, licki!! So fiction is no more stranger than truth :) Hi, kinky & Nixong! Thanks guys for your comments and glad you liked it too. Second chapter would come out soon as promised. It is shaping up even better, i assure you, guys :)
This is the best story and well writen. I had not found any indian stories so nicely written. keep it up. Would like to read more of you.
I love these characters. The situation and sex is very good. Thank you.
Again a great story. One I can really imagine happening and one I would like to have been in!