All Comments on 'My New Canadian Friends'

This story was so hot! Everything happened so naturally. It wasn't "over-told". I sure hope you continue to write stories like this. I can't wait.

You have excellent writing skills. I enjoyed the story a lot and well, it was the last story I will read tonight if you get my meaning.

I too liked how it was not over-told but I did find things a bit jarring during a few of the transitions. Overall, however, this is one of my favorite stories on here.

The theme was great but the action was hard to follow, it jumped around so much after the dance.

to hard to follow confusing no trasition from one stream to another need more than a paragragh "pause"

Doesn't deserve the 1 rating from the comment below. I agree that the sex scenes could be fleshed out some so the transitions aren't as abrupt. I don't know, maybe you were trying to let the reader use their imagination to fill in the gaps. It's a hot story anyway. More, please!

This story really excited me. I've never gone for this theme before, but I will be looking for more from you.

I did love it. I thought it a great story and it brought back memories. I'm not an expert but I feel it was well written because there were no ugly errors. It wasn't overdone with a lot of 'stuff' just there to pack it out. I don't come here to read Shakesphere etc. and I am thankful when I can have my cock in hand during a good dirty storey. The hero could perhaps have been a bit more kinky but I will look for more.

Good story

Absolutely loved your story! As a female who has had a similar fantasy for years, it definitely hit the spot. :) I agree that the transitions were a little rough, but you are a very talented writer. I'll be looking for more from you.

Far too many extreme adjectives to be enjoyable. Less is more.

Loved it. Keep it going!

Lots and lots of vibrant language! I liked this one a lot.

So damn hot and I can just imagine how the whole thing played out. Fantastic writing and erotic imagery

Hot. I coulld almost taste it. All of it. Thanks.

i wish more couples would live out their fantizes this is so hot i just wish i was doug

You should continue to write.

Cannot wait to read more. Story is soo hot and erotic!

Wish I could get the nerve to do this and let my wife know I want to try it. I'm hard!

Oh my, love to be either of these guys!

As an older married bisexual man, I have met several nice married couples over the years and somehow spent the evening with them and the night in their bed!

Just like Doug and Liz, they attracted me as I did them! Then they would tell me

that this was always a fantasy of theirs? I would soon find out that it's nice to be well endowed at a thick 8 1/2 inches as most of the husband's had 5 or 6 inches?

Being a man who had sex with probably 50 sets of married couples over 30 years.

Leads credence to your well written culpable story?

Biggest shock and surprise was that many wive's wish to see their husband suck on another man's cock? Did I reciprocate, of course and had great sex with his wife after she got what she wanted? To watch her husband suck cock? I liked this story as you set a perfect setting and build up to what many first time couples actually do?

Like to have you write more for we men who are accommodating with a first time bisexual couple?

Thank You. Bravo!