All Comments on 'My New Fantasy Life Ch. 01'

by Texan77

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julie_oregonjulie_oregonabout 15 years ago
Looking forward to Part 2

Very nice start to a story. Looking forward to Part 2 soon.

wrc264wrc264about 15 years ago
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really do hope you are going to continue this story line.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
We don't know a lot about the mystery woman

She has seduced both the doctor and her husband, and we don't know anything about her, except she has a mole on her ass. Who sent her to see the doctor in the first place, and is she always going to be that easy to get into her pants? I'm sure the good doctor will be slurping pussy juice very soon. Good story and I'll be watching for the next chapter......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More More!

Excellent first chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
AUTHOR DROPPED THE BALL

...and has not picked it up for 10 years.

If another Literotica writer picked up the ball, and continued as well as Texan77's promising start, this could turn into an intriguing 5 star fantasy story.

If you write sequel, please notify us here in the comments.

Paul in Oklahoma

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