All Comments on 'My New Pet Elf: Elf Queen'

You should have him get back at Rita with Emregalia. It would be funny, having karma catch up with her. And this storyline isn't too bad.

keep up the good work. I am hoping to read more if you have the time to write more... its actually amusing (fun to read without getting a boner in public) to read.

Your elf pet series always gets me going. I was worries that chapter 6 was the end, im glad it wasnt

Thank you for adding chapters to your " My New Pet Elf " series it is one of my faviorte.

As you have started a new part I hope you will intertwine John and his elves into it in the future . I have this listed on my faviortes so I check back reaularly . Sorry my spellcheck is on the blip .

Thanks again

TX CRACKER

The stories are amazing and I was really glad when I found out you continued past chapter 6 however I think that the series will be better if John uses Emrelgia to get back at Rita

i hope you continue this series it has enough story and is erotic enough without being to much of either to throw me off and the story line is so interesting unlike many stories i read on literotica this one really pulled me in, please continue this series, please, please, please.

Please keep going it's so good it's the best erotica story ever made

You should do a follow-up to this where Rita gets wrekt😂

I like the story a lot. AAAAA+++++