All Comments on 'My New Pet Robot 01'

Interesting story, but you certainly ended the first story in a strange point.

And I want to see more but you really have stopped at a strange spot.

Sorry, the cut was made to suit the length of the chapter, it was one of those awkward choices where there was no really appropriate place, as you'll see when you read the continuation tomorrow. Hopefully the end of tomorrows episode is more appropriate.

Beatnic.

One thing that would make your stories easier to read would be breaks of some sort between changes of scenery. I know that you have a number of stories out there and am slowly working my way though them but using ~~~ or some thing similar between changes of scenery would help a great deal.

Having said that I have been enjoying your stories and plan on reading more of them. Keep going.